Monday, January 31, 2011

Five Canons of Rhetoric

http://staff.fcps.net/wturner/Fall%20Semester%20Exam%20Review%20Powerpoint.pdf

For the next two weeks, this will be our primary focus in the analysis of text-certainly use what you have been using successfully-however, I want everyone to think like Aristotle and other Greek rhetoricians.

I will NOT distribute a handout of this power point, but I will provide a "condensed" version of the Five Canons of Rhetoric. I urge you to download and print this resource.

Saturday, January 29, 2011

Satire Writing Assignment

Due A and B Bands on Tuesday, 1 February and on Wednesday, 2 February for D Band.

ABSOLUTELY NO EXCUSES FOR NOT HAVING IT COMPLETED AS YOU WALK INTO THE CLASSROOM! If you are experiencing any printer malfunctioning, you will email me the assignment prior to the start of the school day. IF YOU FAIL TO COMPLY WITH THIS DIRECTIVE, I WILL NOT ACCEPT YOUR ASSIGNMENT LATE DO NOT ENTER THE CLASS LATE WITH THE ASSIGNMENT IN YOUR HAND-I WILL ASSUME YOU USED A SCHOOL'S COMPUTER AND HENCE YOU ARE TURNING THE ASSIGNMENT IN LATE-THEREFORE, I WILL NOT ACCEPT IT! Please do not hand me a note from a parent attepting to excuse you -I will not accept it!

NYS English Regents

Your score has been posted on Grade Speed. If you are not satisfied with the grade, consider re-taking the exam in June.

http://www.p12.nysed.gov/osa/scoring/111/home.html

Click on the link for the January examination, scoring key and the CONVERSION CHART.

Schedule for week of 1 February

A/B Bands (Tuesday, 1 February/Wednesday 2 February) Rhetorical Analysis of two speeches:Ronald Reagan -Challenger (25 years ago-do not tell me that you did not watch the news this weekend) and George W. Bush -Columbia.

http://www.famousquotes.me.uk/speeches/Ronald_Reagan/1.htm
Challenger

http://www.presidentialrhetoric.com/speeches/02.01.03.html
Columbia Speech



ALL Bands (Thursday, 3 February and Friday, 4 February): Answering the Multiple Choice Question on the AP Examination-We will annotate the passages together and collaboratively answer the questions.

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Monday, January 17, 2011

Analyzing Political Cartoons

Prepare yourself for an upcoming assignment by taking the practice test on this site titled "It's No Laughing Matter."
http://lcweb2.loc.gov:8081/learn/features/political_cartoon/model.html

Read the instructions first.

Understanding Political Cartoons

A Tutorial:

http://www.wisc-online.com/objects/SOC102/SOC102.swf

Sunday, January 16, 2011

What Grade Do You Expect To Receive In The Class?

Unfortunately, many students have unrealistic expectations regarding their final grade for the semester. How is it possible for students -who time and time again-practically for every assignment-enter the classroom with excuses for NOT being able to place their assignment in the class folder! MY HOMEWORK POLICY HAS BEEN REPEATED NUMEROUS TIMES-VERBALLY AND POSTED ON THIS BLOG. FOR THOSE WHO DID NOT TURN-IN THE ASSIGNMENT ON FRIDAY AS YOU ENTERED THE CLASSROOM-I have deducted one-full letter grade. YOU HAD OVER ONE-WEEK TO COMPLETE THE ASSIGNMENT. I WONDER HOW MANY OF YOU WAITED UNTIL THURSDAY EVENING TO BEGIN WORKING ON IT?

WHY IS IT ALWAYS THE SAME STUDENTS? WHY DO YOU SUPPOSE I BEGAN THE POSTING THE WAY I DID?

EFFECTIVE IMMEDIATELY: IF YOU DO NOT TURN-IN THE ASSIGNMENT IMMEDIATELY UPON ENTERING THE CLASSROOM ON THE DAY IT IS DUE, I DO NOT WANT IT-UNLESS YOU HAVE EMAILED THE ASSIGNMENT PRIOR TO THE START TIME OF THE CLASS-I DO NOT WANT IT! FURTHERMORE, DO NOT ENTER THE CLASS LATE WITH THE EXCUSE THAT YOU HAD TO USE A SCHOOL'S PRINTER!



Begin Practicing for the SAT

MANDATORY: Sign-up for the free the resources available at the College Board. There you can begin practicimg for the SAT.
https://quickstart.collegeboard.com/posweb/login.jsp?AffiliateID=1&BannerID=ba_190346

You will need the "access code" which appears on your PSAT score report. Once you register, print a confirmation and turn it in to me. I am sure you are asking for a reason. Since this has been mandated by Mr. DelRe, you have no choice. In addition, I will provide bagels and refreshments for the FIRST Band (the entire class) where ALL students have returned their confirmation forms to me: DEADLINE FOR THE "BREAKFAST" is Friday, 21 January 2011!

Friday, January 14, 2011

Essay Structures
Jonathan Swift's Proposal Structure in "A Modest Proposal" (1729)

Problem & Its Importance
Advantages of proposal
Proposal
Explanation of proposal
Advantages Enumerated
Objections to proposal refuted, conceded, or dismissed
Restatement of advantages
Disclaimer


Form
1 Introduction establishing common ground, ending in thesis
2 Background, definition of terms
3 Reasons (pro points) for the writer's stance, usually one per paragraph, with explanations and illustrations, using various rhetorical modes (patterns of development)
4 Opposition (con points): recognition and response to the most important points of those opposing the writer's stance
5 Conclusion, with an earned, contingent, qualified thesis, more precise than in the introduction

For further reading: Edward P. J. Corbett, Classical Rhetoric for the Modern Student, 2nd ed. (New York: Oxford UP, 1971), pages 31-39.

Satire Assignments

Compare the Modest Proposal to The Doctor Will See You Now
http://www.nytimes.com/1992/01/12/opinion/the-doctor-won-t-see-you-now.html

In what way are they similar in style and structure? Which one makes more of an impact? Why? Paragraph due Tuesday, 18 January.

Read for Wednesday, 19 January: Coyote V. Acme
http://www.torinfo.com/justforlaughs/coyote_v_acme.html

What is being satirized? Support with evidence. Paragraph due Wednesday, 19 January



Satire Writing Assignment

Satire Writing Assignment

http://www.lhup.edu/rparker/advcomp/satireassignment.htm

I discovered this assignment on a college site for Advanced Composition. Since it appealed to me for several reasons, I decided to assign it to you. YOU WILL TURN IN THIS ASSIGNMENT IMMEDIATELY UPON YOUR RETURN AFTER REGENTS WEEK. READING YOUR SATIRES WILL BE A JOY FOR ME! HAVE FUN!

Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Presentations Documentary Film Analysis

We will continue the presentations on Thursday, 13 January. Everyone must be ready-NO EXCUSES!

NYS English Regents

I know everyone is anxious to discover his/her grade on the exam. We will not be able to inform you of this until the NYS DOE creates a "conversion chart." Once this is done, we will be able to determine the score based on your Multiple Choice raw score (max. 25) and total "essay" score
(max. 10-2pts 0-1-2 pts for each paragraph and 0-6 for the critical lens)

I am pleased to share with you that most students scored between 20-25 on the multiple choice.

A Reminder

750 word Argumentative Researched Essay (Rough Draft #1) Due Friday, 14 January-based on one of the Prompts/Options. If you are absent, you must email me this assignment prior to 1430 hours on Friday-send as a MS Word Document (KDiedri@schools.nyc.gov)

If you have misplaced this assignment, scroll down and you will locate it.

Monday, January 3, 2011

Documentary Film Project

I expect that each member of the class submit an "Individual Viewing Chart" that differs from a group member's chart. This is logical-there is simply no rebuttal to this. Another Believe It Or Not Was Observed by Diedrich during D-Band on Monday. A student was simply copying a group members' chart. How could this be? Recall my instructions? Furthermore, all one has to do is read the posts on this blog and read the handouts. I also find it amazing that this student actually told me that he/she and his/her group members discussed the film! WOW! The assignment was to watch it together. I will know how much an individual group member contributed.

http://www.nysedregents.org/ComprehensiveEnglish/

In preparation for the English Regents on Tuesday, 11 January, I "urge" you to review the previous exams. Click on Session Two -practice the multiple choice questions (the teacher scoring guide will provide the answers). Also, examine model essays provided for the Critical Lens. Pay particular attention to the essays rated a "6." Examine the introductions and the manner in which the students discussed the texts in connection with the critical lens, as well as, how literary elements were introduced.

Use these links for Regents Prep

http://www.leasttern.com/LitTerms/literary_terms.htm

Literary Terms for English

http://projects.uwc.utexas.edu/handouts/?q=node/45

Creating a Strong Thesis

http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/nap/glossary_a.htm

A Glossary of Terms-click on the side-bar link for the flash-cards. No need to type in the answer-just click the "ANSWER" link

http://www.srjcwritingcenter.com/paragraphs/unity/unity.html

Paragraph Unity: Watch the Videos

http://www.grammar-quizzes.com/thesis_sent.html

Practice on Points of English Grammar and Writing

Saturday, January 1, 2011

Schedule for Week of 3 January

Happy New Year! (A reminder-NYS English Regents is on Tuesday, 11 January at 8:45; bring at least two black/blue ink pens-no designer ink-highlighters/pencils for annotating text, if desired-which is recommended by Diedrich.)

NOTE: Check-out the two power-points that appear below-you will have to click-on older posts for documentary film analysis and camera shots.

I am sure you have noticed the "mini-research" argumentative essay assignment that appears below. "No, I have not forgotten about the satire writing assignment." We will probably read two additional satires prior to you receiving the task.

For this week, you will be presenting your analysis of a Documentary Film. I do not know exactly how many days this will take since I will request written feedback from all class members (Constructive criticism-Be honest). Volunteers to present "first" will be given extra-credit. Refer to blog posts that appear below and to your handouts in preparation for your presentations.

BE ADVISED THAT THROUGHOUT THE WEEK DURING 371/2 MINUTES TUTORIAL- ENGLISH TEACHERS WILL BE PROVIDING TUTORING FOR THE ENGLISH REGENTS. I will be providing tutoring on Friday, 7 January from 2:30 to 4:00. I encourage you to visit other teachers-you do not have to be "their" student. You may also bring a friend (not your "posse") to my tutorial (Seating is limited-I will close the door once the room fills-up).



AP Language and Composition
Argumentative Researched Essay (A "warm-up" for your MAJOR Research Paper.)

The following five essay prompts come from previous AP English Language exams.

  • Choose ONE of the following prompts
  • Compose a formal, 750 word (not including research) response
    • Conduct research; include at least two resources. Use at least one resource in support of your stance; use at least one resource that supports your opponents' views. The research sources you use must come from scholarly, reliable sites. (Wikipedia does not meet the criteria for scholarly research.)
    • Your response must conform to MLA/APA formatting and include a works cited page

Rough draft #1 due date:

Rough draft #2 due date:

Final draft due:

OPTION ONE

Read the following excerpt from The Decline of Radicalism (1969) by Daniel J. Boorstin and consider the implications of the distinction Boorstin makes between dissent and disagreement. Then, using appropriate evidence, write a carefully reasoned essay in which you defend, challenge, or qualify Boorstin's distinction.

Dissent is the great problem of America today. It overshadows all others. It is a symptom, an expression, a consequence, and a cause of all others. I say dissent and not disagreement. And it is the distinction between dissent and disagreement which I really want to make. Disagreement produces debate but dissent produces dissension. Dissent (which comes from the Latin, dis and sentire) means originally to feel apart from others. People who disagree have an argument, but people who dissent have a quarrel. People may disagree and both may count themselves in the majority. But a person who dissents is by definition in a minority. A liberal society thrives on disagreement but is killed by dissension. Disagreement is the life blood of democracy, dissension is its cancer.

OPTION TWO

In many national elections, only a fraction of eligible voters actually casts ballots. For local elections, the voter turnout is often even smaller. To prevent this state of affairs, some countries, such as Australia, make voting compulsory for all adults. In a well-written essay that draws upon your reading, experience, or observations for support, take a position on the issue of compulsory voting.

OPTION THREE

In "The Singer Solution to World Poverty," an article that appeared in The New York Times Magazine, Peter Singer, a professor of bioethics, calls attention to the urgent need for food and medicine in many parts of the world. Singer argues that prosperous people should donate to overseas aid organizations such as UNICEF or Oxfam America all money not needed for the basic requirements of life. "The formula is simple: whatever money you're spending on luxuries, not necessities, should be given away."

Write an essay in which you evaluate the pros and cons of Singer's argument. Use appropriate evidence as you examine each side, and indicate which position you find more persuasive.

OPTION FOUR

Contemporary life is marked by controversy. Choose a controversial local, national, or global issue with which you are familiar. Then, using appropriate evidence, write an essay that carefully considers the opposing positions on this controversy and proposes a solution or compromise.

OPTION FIVE

In the introduction to her book Poison Penmanship: The Gentle Art of Muckraking, investigative journalist Jessica Mitford (1917-1996) confronts accusations that she is a "muckraker." While the term was used by United States president Theodore Roosevelt in a 1906 speech to insult journalists who had, in his opinion, gone too far in the pursuit of their stories, the term "muckraker" is now more often used to refer to one who "searches out and publicly exposes real or apparent misconduct of a prominent individual or business." With this more current definition in mind, Mitford was ultimately happy to accept the title "Queen of the Muckrakers."

Do you agree with Mitford's view that it is an honor to be called a "muckracker," or do you think that journalists who search out and expose real or apparent misconduct go too far in the pursuit of their stories? Explain your position in a well-written essay that uses specific evidence for support.


Research Paper Resources

The OWL at PURDUE

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/

Quoting, Paraphrasing, and Summarizing:

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/563/01/

Tips and Examples for Writing Thesis Statements:

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/

Temple University Writing Center

Handouts, Tipsheets, and Writing Guides:

http://www.temple.edu/writingctr/student_resources/handouts_main.htm


Crafting An Effective Thesis Statement:

http://www.temple.edu/writingctr/student_resources/writing_revising_thesis.htm

Expressing Coordination in Sentences:

http://www.temple.edu/writingctr/student_resources/coordination.html

Expressing Subordination in Sentences:

http://www.temple.edu/writingctr/student_resources/subordination.html

Handouts on Style, Clarity of Expression, and Point of View:

http://www.temple.edu/writingctr/student_resources/sr_style.htm

Understanding Common Task Words and Phrases:

http://www.temple.edu/writingctr/student_resources/task_words.htm

***Effective Verbs For Referring To Source Material:***EXTREMELY HELPFUL!

http://www.temple.edu/writingctr/student_resources/verbs_for_sources.htm

Handouts on Thesis Statements, Argumentation, and Problem Posing:

http://www.temple.edu/writingctr/student_resources/sr_argument.htm